Entity 63 - "The Mangled" / Discussion

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:root {
        --sidebar-width-on-desktop: calc(var(--base-font-size) * (266 / 15));
        --body-width-on-desktop: 45.75rem;
    }
    @media only screen and (min-width: 56.25rem) {
        #content-wrap {
            display: flex;
            position: initial;
            flex-direction: row;
            flex-grow: 2;
            width: calc(100vw - (100vw - 100%));
            max-width: inherit;
            height: auto;
            min-height: calc(100vh - var(--final-header-height-on-desktop, 10.125rem));
            margin: 0 var(--sidebar-width-on-desktop, 13.6rem) 0 calc(var(--sidebar-width-on-desktop, 13.6rem) * -1 / 2);
        }
 
        #main-content {
            position: initial;
            width: var(--body-width-on-desktop, 45.75rem);
            max-width: var(--body-width-on-desktop, 45.75rem);
            max-height: 100%;
            margin: 0 auto;
            padding: 2rem 1rem;
        }
 
        #page-content {
            max-width: min(90vw, var(--body-width-on-desktop, 45.75rem));
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            position: sticky;
            top: 0;
            left: 0;
            grid-area: side-bar;
            width: var(--sidebar-width-on-desktop, 13.6rem) !important;
            min-width: var(--sidebar-width-on-desktop, 13.6rem) !important;
            max-height: 100vh;
            padding-right: 2.5rem;
            padding-left: 0.5rem;
            overflow-y: scroll;
            transition:
                translate 300ms cubic-bezier(0.4, 0.0, 0.2, 1),
                background-color 300ms cubic-bezier(0.4, 0.0, 0.2, 1),
                padding 300ms linear,
                margin 300ms linear;
            border: none;
            border-color: rgba(var(--swatch-tertiary-color, 170, 170, 170), 0.4);
            background-color: rgba(var(--sidebar-bg-color, 255, 255, 255), 0);
            translate: calc(var(--sidebar-width-on-desktop, 13.5rem) * -1 - 1rem);
            direction: rtl;
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            -ms-scroll-chaining: none;
                overscroll-behavior: contain;
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                rgba(var(--swatch-primary-darker), 0.1) /* Thumb */
                rgba(var(--swatch-tertiary-color), 0.05); /* Track */
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        #side-bar::-webkit-scrollbar-track {
            background-color: rgba(var(--swatch-secondary-color, 244, 244, 244), 0.8);
        }
 
        #side-bar::-webkit-scrollbar,
        #side-bar::-webkit-scrollbar-thumb,
        #side-bar::-webkit-scrollbar-corner {
            width: 0.5rem;
            border-right-width: calc(100vw + 100vh);
            border-right-style: inset;
            border-color: inherit;
            background-color: rgba(var(--sidebar-bg-color, 255, 255, 255), 0);
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        #side-bar:is(:hover, :active, :focus-within) {
            margin-right: 2.25rem;
            padding-right: 0.25rem;
            overflow-x: hidden;
            overflow-y: auto;
            border-color: rgba(var(--swatch-primary-darker), 1);
            background-color: rgba(var(--sidebar-bg-color, 255, 255, 255), 1);
            translate: calc(var(--sidebar-width-on-desktop, 1rem) - var(--sidebar-width-on-desktop, 0));
            scrollbar-color: 
                rgba(170, 170, 170, 1)  /* Thumb */
                rgba(252, 252, 252, 1); /* Track */
            scrollbar-color: 
                rgb(var(--swatch-primary-darker, 170, 170, 170), 1) /* Thumb */
                rgb(var(--swatch-menubg-color, 252, 252, 252), 1);  /* Track */
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            top: 0;
            left: 1rem;
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            justify-content: center;
            width: 1rem;
            height: 100%;
            max-height: 100%;
            transition:
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                background-position 300ms cubic-bezier(0.4, 0.0, 0.2, 1),
                opacity 300ms cubic-bezier(0.4, 0.0, 0.2, 1);
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            background-attachment: fixed;
            background-repeat: no-repeat;
            background-position: center left 1rem;
            background-size: 1rem 12.875rem;
            pointer-events: none;
        }
 
        #side-bar:is(:hover, :active, :focus-within) + #main-content::after {
            left: calc(var(--sidebar-width-on-desktop, 14.5rem) * -1);
            width: 0rem;
            transition:
                left 300ms cubic-bezier(0.4, 0.0, 0.2, 1),
                background-position 300ms cubic-bezier(0.4, 0.0, 0.2, 1),
                opacity 300ms cubic-bezier(0.4, 0.0, 0.2, 1);
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            font-size: 0em;
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            content: " ";
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            z-index: 9;
            top: var(--final-header-height-on-desktop, 0);
            left: 0;
            width: var(--sidebar-width-on-desktop, 14.5rem);
            height: calc(100% - var(--final-header-height-on-desktop, 0.688rem) - 2.313rem);
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            transition:
                translate 300ms cubic-bezier(0.4, 0.0, 0.2, 1),
                opacity 300ms cubic-bezier(0.4, 0.0, 0.2, 1);
            opacity: 0.5;
            background-color: rgb(var(--swatch-alternate-color, 0, 0, 0));
            pointer-events: none;
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        #side-bar:is(:hover, :active, :focus-within) + #main-content::before {
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            border-left-width: 0rem;
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            direction: ltr;
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        #side-bar .scpnet-interwiki-wrapper {
            direction: ltr;
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        /* Print Friendly Formatting by Estrella */
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            --sidebar-width-on-desktop: 0; 
        } 
        body.print-body #main-content::before,
        body.print-body #main-content::after { 
            display: none; 
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    }

This is the discussion related to the wiki page Entity 63 - "The Mangled".

Good, but unorganized

Crescentlake 23 Feb 2021 06:41

I enjoyed reading this article and I don't have any major problems with it, but the structure is a bit messy.

Criticisms
These Entities are extremely dangerous, but are also very rare to encounter.

I don't think this really belongs in the description. Maybe the fact that they're dangerous could go at the top of the behaviour section, and then you could list their dangerous behaviours/properties.

These Entities only appear when a Wanderer has been inside Level 9 for a few days. During these days the Wanderer would see large sections of fog randomly in Level 9. This fog is not harmful, but can damage hearing for a short amount of time, due to the large amounts of distorted wind noise emitting from the fog. This fog also can go down to temperatures below zero (0) °C, so it's freezing cold. After the Wanderer has encountered these fog clouds enough, The Mangled will start to appear.

If I'm being honest, I don't really like the way you introduced the fog. In my opinion, it is mildly confusing and less effective when you mention the fog first and then tell how it relates to the entity. Instead you could immediately state how the entity relates to the fog: "Mangled seem to manifest from a freezing white fog which only appears after a certain period of time is spent within Level 9." You could then describe the fog a little.

Overall I like the article I just think it has a few structure issues

EpicNecromancer1 14 Jan 2022 14:20

It astounds me just how many SPaG and structure errors the earlier articles have.