Fairly interesting and I love the atmosphere of this one!
In my opinion, the list of events is not the best because it is sort of messy and hard to understand.
This event is simple, and the most common, you walk into a random person watching TV, and will completely ignore you, if physically interacted, more whispers will repetitively tell you to stop, and they will get louder and faster if actions are continued, once the action is made you will pass out, and wake up in "Level 0".
In my opinion, each of these events need to be written in a structured way. Currently when something about an event is described, it is broken into many disjointed sentences, which can be confusing and doesn't read nicely. There are also grammar issues such as run-on sentences.
For example, here I have partially re-written Event 1 and condensed all the info about the television into one half of a sentence. I also tried to continually refer back to the person watching TV, since they seem to be the main focus of the event. This is just an example, there still might be several problems with it:
Upon entering a door, you will find a person sitting in a velvet armchair while watching various 1980s and 90s television programmes. This person's traits seem to change each time and they may be of any gender, ethnicity, or age. They will not respond to conversation, and trying to speak with them results in loud hushes and whispers emanating from the room. These whispers become louder and faster if you continue to speak to the person, eventually causing you to pass out […]