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by: BlueSignetBlueSignet
10 May 2024 22:44
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A short place for non-Greenlighter critiquers to introduce themselves.
by: BlueSignetBlueSignet
31 Oct 2023 00:15
11 by msluce09msluce09
15 May 2024 01:48 Jump!
AKA how to make your draft more attractive
by: ShroomDispencerShroomDispencer
31 Mar 2020 15:38
6 by themadvirus613themadvirus613
15 Jul 2022 14:43 Jump!
by: RichardSongTTRichardSongTT
22 Jun 2024 17:37
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This level is a vast plain with rich and diverse vegetation, suitable for the development and long-term living of many creatures, including humans.
by: Dang NguyenDang Nguyen
22 Jun 2024 04:50
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by: ThatPenguinThatPenguin
17 Jun 2024 11:54
9 by Error012Error012
22 Jun 2024 16:52 Jump!
An approximately 1000-word tale of a guy trying to explore a hospital, whilst simultaneously feeling a eerie sensation engulfing his mind. Took 4-5 days and many edits to finish. In a sandbox but can't post the link yet :(
by: franciumchloridefranciumchloride
15 Jun 2024 02:56
3 by franciumchloridefranciumchloride
15 Jun 2024 04:06 Jump!
Level 131 is a farm level, but different from others that were created before, it has a sentient entity and farm-themed activities, but with interesting twists. I hope you enjoy it.
by: GenoFanGenoFan
09 Jun 2024 16:31
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A series of diaries found on Level 4 that talk about a MEG Agent who came to this endless hallway. His life did not have a happy ending, he did not expect anything, only his death.
by: Error012Error012
04 Jun 2024 19:02
4 by Error012Error012
18 Jun 2024 17:36 Jump!
by: Abizcool12Abizcool12
17 May 2024 02:45
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by: Abizcool12Abizcool12
17 May 2024 02:43
2 by BlueSignetBlueSignet
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by: LinkandDriztLinkandDrizt
14 May 2024 15:53
4 by LinkandDriztLinkandDrizt
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by: ARG MakerARG Maker
12 May 2024 18:39
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Hello, fellow wanderers and greenlighters! Iโ€™m back with another level that needs a greenlight. This time, itโ€™s a level in the traditional sense with some unique properties, not with some dark gods or the Temple of Strife. Again, I would love to see some amazing critique on it. What did I do wrong? What can I add? What typos did I make? Would this be okay to put on the site? See for yourself by clicking the link to my level, looking through the page inside of that link, and typing your thoughts on your very own reply. It's very appreciative if you do.
by: Kyrenzane10Kyrenzane10
12 May 2024 07:31
3 by ReyDayReyDay
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by: 4KOWOyt4KOWOyt
09 May 2024 09:43
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by: PearbranchPearbranch
06 May 2024 02:19
3 by TheValutaterTheValutater
11 May 2024 13:46 Jump!
We here at the Backrooms Robotics Workshop has developed a new way to disillusion and break your love ones out of the hideous 141 entityโ€™s control
by: Z zabra1Z zabra1
01 May 2024 13:40
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by: ThatPenguinThatPenguin
30 Apr 2024 20:43
6 by ThatPenguinThatPenguin
14 May 2024 22:01 Jump!
A school which is covered in purple gloom
by: CriminalOfLiminalCriminalOfLiminal
25 Apr 2024 19:21
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by: z dnz dn
21 Apr 2024 10:09
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