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an immense, dilapidated factory in which you’re instructed to complete security patrols by an anomalous app. there are no threatening entities. seems innocuous enough…
by: snailjailsnailjail
04 Nov 2021 07:18
4 by (account deleted)
05 Nov 2021 15:12 Jump!
i need critize and greenlight
by: (account deleted)
28 Oct 2021 02:49
2 by saiconihachidasaiconihachida
04 Nov 2021 02:36 Jump!
Something small that will turn into big
by: (account deleted)
03 Nov 2021 17:03
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Wanna know if anybody likes the idea.
by: (account deleted)
03 Nov 2021 13:30
2 by TrailmixNCocoaTrailmixNCocoa
03 Nov 2021 15:00 Jump!
If you stumble across a red bar in the streets of Level 11, be prepared to grow. A lot.
by: Blueguy23Blueguy23
27 Oct 2021 19:54
2 by JamiMystJamiMyst
01 Nov 2021 16:26 Jump!
Level 969 - The Three Realities
by: Mighty PotatoMighty Potato
30 Oct 2021 05:13
2 by JamiMystJamiMyst
01 Nov 2021 16:09 Jump!
A cave system that changes the further a wanderer goes in
by: NavyEOD_24NavyEOD_24
31 Oct 2021 04:01
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First article! Don’t have too high expectations but please do tell what I did right/wrong, and hey if it’s good enough please give a greenlight!
by: KritKatKritKat
30 Oct 2021 17:41
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Snails that bind to a wanderer, which will kill them if the snail dies.
by: JamiMystJamiMyst
26 Oct 2021 16:04
3 by JamiMystJamiMyst
29 Oct 2021 20:46 Jump!
just what the title says
by: SecaraSecara
28 Oct 2021 16:47
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My first time writing so I don’t expect much but please let me know what I did good and/or wrong, and hey if it’s good enough please leave a green light.
by: KritKatKritKat
28 Oct 2021 08:37
4 by FerraruFerraru
28 Oct 2021 11:22 Jump!
My first ever sandbox creation, hope you like it! :)
by: Dimondduk992Dimondduk992
17 Sep 2021 23:16
3 by JamiMystJamiMyst
26 Oct 2021 16:26 Jump!
Basically, incredibly strong glass bottles that could also warn you after certain entities.
by: hereforthecreepshereforthecreeps
21 Oct 2021 21:37
2 by JamiMystJamiMyst
26 Oct 2021 16:13 Jump!
Written as a sequel type of thing to Object 38
by: Kate6969Kate6969
23 Oct 2021 05:07
3 by Kate6969Kate6969
26 Oct 2021 00:05 Jump!
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by: saiconihachidasaiconihachida
22 Oct 2021 05:22
3 by Kai4CKai4C
22 Oct 2021 05:59 Jump!
Please I need HARD critique for my spookycontest2021 entry. A candy-based object on level 9
by: RezCheddarRezCheddar
21 Oct 2021 22:43
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a new terrifying entity I've created. warning that the image I created also unsettles me too.
by: mrbloopmrbloop
21 Oct 2021 00:11
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Fourth part of a series. Needs a green light.
by: Paint PalettePaint Palette
28 Sep 2021 14:39
3 by Paint PalettePaint Palette
20 Oct 2021 18:02 Jump!
Approval needed
by: Mighty PotatoMighty Potato
19 Oct 2021 04:53
2 by Mighty PotatoMighty Potato
20 Oct 2021 04:15 Jump!
I have not tried writing anything for a very long time, and I still need to know what can I remove and/or focus more on. But anyway, it is an idea for a grim reaper like entity for when some wanderer's die, by supposedly bringing them to his level. A semi-benevolent entity that claims to care for the dead.
by: ZavvnaoZavvnao
19 Oct 2021 16:59
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