Help: Draft Critique
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WANT MORE DRAFT REVIEWS?
AKA how to make your draft more attractive
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by: 31 Mar 2020 15:38 |
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Need Critique?
Where to solicit critique
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by: 07 Jun 2020 13:11 |
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by 04 Jun 2023 22:56 Jump! |
Lookin for some critique for an article about bombs. Bombs that crawl. Bombs that can crawl inside of you, and then do bomb things. Bombs that come in swarms. Swarm bombs.
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by: 08 Sep 2023 16:45 |
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by: 14 Sep 2023 20:51 |
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by 20 Sep 2023 15:55 Jump! |
We're doing this a sixth time... Again, this is my first level on the site, and I would love to see some amazing critique on it. What did I do wrong? What can I add? What typos did I make? Would this be okay to put on the site? See for yourself by clicking the link to my level, looking through the page inside of that link, and typing your thoughts on your very own reply. It's very appreciative if you do.
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by: 30 Jul 2023 20:15 |
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by 18 Sep 2023 11:52 Jump! |
This is the lucky number seventh time that I am doing this. Again, this is my first level on the site, and I would love to see some amazing critique on it. What did I do wrong? What can I add? What typos did I make? Would this be okay to put on the site? See for yourself by clicking the link to my level, looking through the page inside of that link, and typing your thoughts on your very own reply. It's very appreciative if you do.
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by: 18 Sep 2023 01:21 |
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Hello!, I publish this so that you can criticize my first entity, I hope you like it.
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by: 16 Sep 2023 05:33 |
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Hello, I'm looking for reviews of my Level 989, this is my first level that I have created, I hope you like it.
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by: 15 Sep 2023 23:58 |
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by: 14 Sep 2023 22:11 |
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This is for ghostchibi's unofficial challenge(yes, I know, I'm late). It's a tale.
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by: 05 Aug 2023 13:19 |
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by 11 Sep 2023 16:52 Jump! |
Entity that scratches doors with green marks, can evolve to survive in any condition with some caveats, and other things.
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by: 10 Sep 2023 20:38 |
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by: 10 Sep 2023 13:45 |
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After some good advice I have removed this. Thank you.
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by: 08 Sep 2023 07:46 |
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by 09 Sep 2023 17:21 Jump! |
It's a fast food burger restraunt with different floors
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by: 08 Sep 2023 23:33 |
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A tale.
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by: 06 Sep 2023 14:51 |
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by: 17 Aug 2023 09:13 |
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by 08 Sep 2023 08:03 Jump! |
I just want someone's opinion on how it looks.
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by: 25 Aug 2023 16:58 |
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by: 06 Sep 2023 03:52 |
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by 07 Sep 2023 13:28 Jump! |
Lookin for some critique for an article about bombs. Bombs that crawl. Bombs that can crawl inside of you, and then do bomb things. Bombs that come in swarms. Swarm bombs.
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by: 05 Sep 2023 15:09 |
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by: 04 Sep 2023 21:07 |
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