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AKA how to make your draft more attractive
by: ShroomDispencerShroomDispencer
31 Mar 2020 15:38
9 by Dr Sebastian GDr Sebastian G
05 Jun 2023 16:46 Jump!
Sticky: Need Critique?
Where to solicit critique
by: ShroomDispencerShroomDispencer
07 Jun 2020 13:11
31 by Dr Sebastian GDr Sebastian G
04 Jun 2023 22:56 Jump!
Lookin for some critique for an article about bombs. Bombs that crawl. Bombs that can crawl inside of you, and then do bomb things. Bombs that come in swarms. Swarm bombs.
by: Bufo_BufoBufo_Bufo
08 Sep 2023 16:45
23 by Bufo_BufoBufo_Bufo
21 Sep 2023 15:44 Jump!
by: x2Syrupzx2Syrupz
14 Sep 2023 20:51
2 by Bufo_BufoBufo_Bufo
20 Sep 2023 15:55 Jump!
We're doing this a sixth time... Again, this is my first level on the site, and I would love to see some amazing critique on it. What did I do wrong? What can I add? What typos did I make? Would this be okay to put on the site? See for yourself by clicking the link to my level, looking through the page inside of that link, and typing your thoughts on your very own reply. It's very appreciative if you do.
by: Kyrenzane10Kyrenzane10
30 Jul 2023 20:15
4 by PenOrSaber1PenOrSaber1
18 Sep 2023 11:52 Jump!
This is the lucky number seventh time that I am doing this. Again, this is my first level on the site, and I would love to see some amazing critique on it. What did I do wrong? What can I add? What typos did I make? Would this be okay to put on the site? See for yourself by clicking the link to my level, looking through the page inside of that link, and typing your thoughts on your very own reply. It's very appreciative if you do.
by: Kyrenzane10Kyrenzane10
18 Sep 2023 01:21
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Hello!, I publish this so that you can criticize my first entity, I hope you like it.
by: Error012Error012
16 Sep 2023 05:33
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Hello, I'm looking for reviews of my Level 989, this is my first level that I have created, I hope you like it.
by: Error012Error012
15 Sep 2023 23:58
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by: ZEN HIGARIZEN HIGARI
14 Sep 2023 22:11
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This is for ghostchibi's unofficial challenge(yes, I know, I'm late). It's a tale.
by: PenOrSaber1PenOrSaber1
05 Aug 2023 13:19
9 by PenOrSaber1PenOrSaber1
11 Sep 2023 16:52 Jump!
Entity that scratches doors with green marks, can evolve to survive in any condition with some caveats, and other things.
by: DoorscratchedDoorscratched
10 Sep 2023 20:38
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by: philosopher30philosopher30
10 Sep 2023 13:45
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After some good advice I have removed this. Thank you.
by: KKitsunebiKKitsunebi
08 Sep 2023 07:46
7 by KKitsunebiKKitsunebi
09 Sep 2023 17:21 Jump!
It's a fast food burger restraunt with different floors
by: Crabs the Tubular Crabs the Tubular
08 Sep 2023 23:33
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A tale.
by: PenOrSaber1PenOrSaber1
06 Sep 2023 14:51
4 by KKitsunebiKKitsunebi
08 Sep 2023 15:46 Jump!
by: FirstKeshorderFirstKeshorder
17 Aug 2023 09:13
4 by KKitsunebiKKitsunebi
08 Sep 2023 08:03 Jump!
I just want someone's opinion on how it looks.
by: PenOrSaber1PenOrSaber1
25 Aug 2023 16:58
16 by PenOrSaber1PenOrSaber1
07 Sep 2023 21:24 Jump!
by: aster_argyleaster_argyle
06 Sep 2023 03:52
4 by Bufo_BufoBufo_Bufo
07 Sep 2023 13:28 Jump!
Lookin for some critique for an article about bombs. Bombs that crawl. Bombs that can crawl inside of you, and then do bomb things. Bombs that come in swarms. Swarm bombs.
by: Bufo_BufoBufo_Bufo
05 Sep 2023 15:09
2 by Bufo_BufoBufo_Bufo
05 Sep 2023 21:54 Jump!
by: WarlikeYak44369WarlikeYak44369
04 Sep 2023 21:07
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