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Where to solicit critique
by: ShroomDispencerShroomDispencer
07 Jun 2020 13:11
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AKA how to make your draft more attractive
by: ShroomDispencerShroomDispencer
31 Mar 2020 15:38
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This is my first level submission, so hopefully I am putting it in the right place.
by: Agent HammerheadAgent Hammerhead
06 Mar 2021 22:08
4 by TrailmixNCocoTrailmixNCoco
08 Mar 2021 05:27 Jump!
by: MemePosterMemePoster
28 Feb 2021 15:57
2 by CutTheBirchCutTheBirch
02 Mar 2021 16:01 Jump!
hey boys, just wrote up my first draft for this new level I had the idea for.
by: thompson_560thompson_560
03 Feb 2021 03:23
2 by CutTheBirchCutTheBirch
03 Feb 2021 03:42 Jump!
I would Like to post A level Called Death Kitchen Ive Been Dreaming Of seeing it on this site Thanks
by: AnthonyD AnthonyD
06 Jan 2021 02:52
10 by CutTheBirchCutTheBirch
02 Feb 2021 20:18 Jump!
An ice cream parlor that used to be a place of refuge used by the Partypoopers. I would love some critique on this, please. Thank you!
by: TrailmixNCocoTrailmixNCoco
02 Feb 2021 19:54
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Bees with some mind manipulation -- scary images galore
by: AnomalousDuckyAnomalousDucky
26 Jan 2021 14:19
5 by AnomalousDuckyAnomalousDucky
01 Feb 2021 16:09 Jump!
Writing an entry for Level 129, and I’d like to have someone proofread my draft.
by: CinnacloveeCinnaclovee
28 Jan 2021 00:48
2 by CutTheBirchCutTheBirch
31 Jan 2021 20:13 Jump!
by: LinusfanLinusfan
14 Jan 2021 18:15
2 by CutTheBirchCutTheBirch
31 Jan 2021 19:42 Jump!
Hello, so I made a level and I wasn't aware of the greenlight policy before
by: ChronosExileChronosExile
08 Jan 2021 20:32
2 by CutTheBirchCutTheBirch
31 Jan 2021 19:39 Jump!
I made an entity and now need to be greenlit.
by: BrokenRubixxBrokenRubixx
05 Jan 2021 20:25
2 by CutTheBirchCutTheBirch
26 Jan 2021 05:49 Jump!
I made a rewrite for the Wall Masks, I would love some critique on it please!
by: TrailmixNCocoTrailmixNCoco
17 Jan 2021 04:00
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It's my first time writing, for a new entity called Evocationaries. I'd love to get feedback! Thank you.
by: TrailmixNCocoTrailmixNCoco
27 Dec 2020 00:10
9 by TrailmixNCocoTrailmixNCoco
08 Jan 2021 04:50 Jump!
Made this entity for a backrooms page I created.
by: BrokenRubixxBrokenRubixx
06 Jan 2021 19:43
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A new entity I worked on that needs a critique.
by: 23vincentrandall23vincentrandall
05 Jan 2021 14:00
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It's my first entry, I would love some feedback on it. Hope it's alright, and thank you!
by: TrailmixNCocoTrailmixNCoco
23 Dec 2020 08:09
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This my draft for a new entity of mine.
by: 23vincentrandall23vincentrandall
17 Dec 2020 17:32
8 by 23vincentrandall23vincentrandall
19 Dec 2020 21:37 Jump!
A security guard checks an abandoned office complex.
by: fractalvoidfractalvoid
13 Dec 2020 04:21
7 by fractalvoidfractalvoid
18 Dec 2020 01:01 Jump!
I created a canonical character for the Industrialization canon, and a Tale about him.
by: egg360egg360
09 Nov 2020 22:55
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