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A short place for non-Greenlighter critiquers to introduce themselves.
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by: 31 Oct 2023 00:15 |
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WANT MORE DRAFT REVIEWS?
AKA how to make your draft more attractive
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by: 31 Mar 2020 15:38 |
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by: 03 Dec 2023 07:33 |
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My first page. A coastal city at night.
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by: 04 Dec 2023 16:20 |
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by: 03 Dec 2023 04:51 |
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by: 07 Nov 2023 18:52 |
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This is the first level (in the middle), which is completely related to the ARE group (recently changed), since for the most part its description is very similar to the MEG. So, this is just the half draft done by the ARE group.
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by: 29 Nov 2023 19:08 |
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New group for the wiki! The A.R.E, only criticism. This group analyzes and explains abnormal levels in more detail.
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by: 26 Nov 2023 21:03 |
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by: 28 Nov 2023 04:06 |
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by: 27 Nov 2023 20:29 |
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The only thing you will be standing on is beach sand. Now no one has been able to see what is behind the wall. This is because it has properties which prevent anyone from crossing. It can cause dizziness, fear of heights and other effects which seem to have no name. Many rumors that there is a hidden area, while others say it takes you to another level.
Level 379 can be completely silent at specific times and the only sounds that can be heard are the sound of the sea on the beach and some sounds of pelicans, but most of the Level 379 is completely silent, there is also a sound that can rarely be heard the which seems to come from the other side of the concrete wall, the sound varies which has been identified as being different sounds from levels of the Backrooms (a city, the hum of fluorescent lights, machinery, etc…).
The water, which varies depending on the person who likes salty or sweet, after a few seconds the explorer begins to feel calm.
That's half of Level 379, I expect ct.
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by: 27 Nov 2023 00:18 |
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Redid level now onto review
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by: 26 Nov 2023 23:35 |
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Yes, I am the one who was given perms. Anyways the concept is basically the same, just refined and expanded upon
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by: 25 Nov 2023 14:53 |
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The Uptown of Level 11. Uptowns are residential areas of urban areas. They are, often. lively, fluxive, and ardent. But the backrooms always manages to tint everything it fetters.
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by: 05 Nov 2023 21:07 |
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by: 18 Nov 2023 18:52 |
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Here is a little article I made, please let me know what you think!
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by: 22 Nov 2023 13:03 |
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by: 22 Nov 2023 12:10 |
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I would like to receive criticism from Entity 199 created by me, the name is "Canine Protection".
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by: 21 Nov 2023 21:48 |
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