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Where to solicit critique
by: ShroomDispencerShroomDispencer
07 Jun 2020 13:11
2 by FerraruFerraru
30 Oct 2021 18:04 Jump!
AKA how to make your draft more attractive
by: ShroomDispencerShroomDispencer
31 Mar 2020 15:38
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Level 417 is an abandoned indoor playground.
by: om5551om5551
21 Jan 2022 22:23
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Level 191 is the 192 Level of the Backrooms. It resembles a small middle school.
by: AstralPlane99AstralPlane99
21 Jan 2022 19:17
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A vending machine that is thought to dispense the flesh of people's relatives, but some more investigations reveal that the machine has some tricks up its sleeve to manipulate its victims. Looking for crit and/or greenlight
by: GasaludoGasaludo
12 Jan 2022 11:49
7 by TrailmixNCocoaTrailmixNCocoa
20 Jan 2022 22:46 Jump!
*slaps myself* this baby can hold so much stupid inside
by: YourWeirdPlantYourWeirdPlant
19 Jan 2022 17:31
3 by YourWeirdPlantYourWeirdPlant
20 Jan 2022 14:11 Jump!
A rural home with a lot more within it than meets the eye.
by: saciachridsaciachrid
20 Jan 2022 01:00
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please greenlight this page
by: thewanderer2142thewanderer2142
20 Jan 2022 00:22
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A Manifest themed level.
by: PinkDudeYTPinkDudeYT
18 Jan 2022 16:40
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The remnants of a once operational Dyson-Sphere, fallen into disrepair. The contained star is slowly growing more **un-contained**.
by: Dr Fabian Leweck Dr Fabian Leweck
16 Jan 2022 20:44
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An idea that I have for Level 29. Looking for critique and/or greenlight.
by: DustierMouse73DustierMouse73
16 Jan 2022 18:11
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A nexus level that connects only to levels with dodecagonal numbers, but also hints at deeper mysteries and is meant to raise further questions toward them.
by: WixeltWixelt
08 Jan 2022 17:22
2 by WixeltWixelt
15 Jan 2022 12:57 Jump!
A Level, appearing to be generic, turns out to be more, than just that... There is an exit and somebody has discovered it.
by: Dr Fabian Leweck Dr Fabian Leweck
15 Jan 2022 12:31
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give critiques plz!
by: Dr ChangpingDr Changping
15 Jan 2022 02:15
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I got a little more experience in writing these wiki dots. This is a new one, I think no one has thought of this in wiki nor fandom.
by: YourWeirdPlantYourWeirdPlant
14 Jan 2022 19:13
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Creating a new one now.
by: YourWeirdPlantYourWeirdPlant
13 Jan 2022 16:16
4 by YourWeirdPlantYourWeirdPlant
14 Jan 2022 14:12 Jump!
I have a very long way to go with this character, but while im still on my initial draft i would like some critique and advice as to make it a bit better
by: MonochromeTTVMonochromeTTV
11 Jan 2022 16:38
3 by MonochromeTTVMonochromeTTV
13 Jan 2022 16:23 Jump!
Errr... A level I guess. Needs a bit more critique.
by: aarnarchyaarnarchy
18 Dec 2021 20:42
2 by gasolineabsorbergasolineabsorber
10 Jan 2022 00:52 Jump!
I wrote this article almost 3 months ago and it has been sitting here collecting dust. Idc idc idc fuck yoy
by: saiconihachidasaiconihachida
16 Dec 2021 04:58
20 by TrailmixNCocoaTrailmixNCocoa
09 Jan 2022 22:28 Jump!
A paralytic wanderer who roams the backrooms in a wheelchair.
by: Journalist OverrideJournalist Override
09 Jan 2022 07:21
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