Help: Draft Critique
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Need Critique?
Where to solicit critique
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by: 07 Jun 2020 13:11 |
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WANT MORE DRAFT REVIEWS?
AKA how to make your draft more attractive
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by: 31 Mar 2020 15:38 |
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This is my first level submission, so hopefully I am putting it in the right place.
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by: 06 Mar 2021 22:08 |
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by: 28 Feb 2021 15:57 |
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hey boys, just wrote up my first draft for this new level I had the idea for.
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by: 03 Feb 2021 03:23 |
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I would Like to post A level Called Death Kitchen Ive Been Dreaming Of seeing it on this site Thanks
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by: 06 Jan 2021 02:52 |
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An ice cream parlor that used to be a place of refuge used by the Partypoopers. I would love some critique on this, please. Thank you!
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by: 02 Feb 2021 19:54 |
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Bees with some mind manipulation -- scary images galore
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by: 26 Jan 2021 14:19 |
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Writing an entry for Level 129, and I’d like to have someone proofread my draft.
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by: 28 Jan 2021 00:48 |
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by: 14 Jan 2021 18:15 |
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by 31 Jan 2021 19:42 Jump! |
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Hello, so I made a level and I wasn't aware of the greenlight policy before
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by: 08 Jan 2021 20:32 |
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I made an entity and now need to be greenlit.
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by: 05 Jan 2021 20:25 |
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I made a rewrite for the Wall Masks, I would love some critique on it please!
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by: 17 Jan 2021 04:00 |
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It's my first time writing, for a new entity called Evocationaries. I'd love to get feedback! Thank you.
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by: 27 Dec 2020 00:10 |
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by 08 Jan 2021 04:50 Jump! |
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Made this entity for a backrooms page I created.
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by: 06 Jan 2021 19:43 |
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A new entity I worked on that needs a critique.
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by: 05 Jan 2021 14:00 |
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It's my first entry, I would love some feedback on it. Hope it's alright, and thank you!
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by: 23 Dec 2020 08:09 |
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This my draft for a new entity of mine.
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by: 17 Dec 2020 17:32 |
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A security guard checks an abandoned office complex.
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by: 13 Dec 2020 04:21 |
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I created a canonical character for the Industrialization canon, and a Tale about him.
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by: 09 Nov 2020 22:55 |
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