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		<title>Level 131</title>
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		<description>Posts in the discussion thread &quot;Level 131&quot; - Level 131 is a farm level, but different from others that were created before, it has a sentient entity and farm-themed activities, but with interesting twists. I hope you enjoy it.</description>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 10 May 2025 10:02:36 +0000</pubDate>
				<wikidot:authorName>Liurnia</wikidot:authorName>				<wikidot:authorUserId>8505191</wikidot:authorUserId>				<content:encoded>
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						 <p>Hello, thank you for sharing your draft. Unfortunately, this forum post does not follow the Sandbox Forum's set of guidelines. Please reread the <a href="https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-17019600/required-reading:draft-forum-guidelines">forum guidelines</a> and edit this post accordingly. The guidelines are mandatory for all draft threads. Once you make the appropriate changes, you can begin to properly seek out critique. <strong>If you do not edit this post within 48 hours, staff will be able to close this forum post.</strong></p> 
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				<title>Re: LOOKING FOR CRITICISM AND GREENLIGHT (Level 131)</title>
				<link>http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16860643/level-131#post-6911581</link>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 06 Apr 2025 19:30:34 +0000</pubDate>
				<wikidot:authorName>GenoFan</wikidot:authorName>				<wikidot:authorUserId>9091009</wikidot:authorUserId>				<content:encoded>
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						 <p>Hello!<br /> Thank you for your criticism. I have learned a lot from the critiques, and I hope I can entertain you and more people in the future.</p> 
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				<title>Re: LOOKING FOR CRITICISM AND GREENLIGHT (Level 131)</title>
				<link>http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16860643/level-131#post-6911580</link>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 06 Apr 2025 19:29:18 +0000</pubDate>
				<wikidot:authorName>GenoFan</wikidot:authorName>				<wikidot:authorUserId>9091009</wikidot:authorUserId>				<content:encoded>
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						 <p>Hello!<br /> Thank you for your review, I have changed the things you mentioned, and it looks a lot better.</p> 
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				<title>Re: LOOKING FOR CRITICISM AND GREENLIGHT (Level 131)</title>
				<link>http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16860643/level-131#post-6597612</link>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 11 Aug 2024 10:27:27 +0000</pubDate>
				<wikidot:authorName>KAMAMO</wikidot:authorName>				<wikidot:authorUserId>9314337</wikidot:authorUserId>				<content:encoded>
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						 <p>Firstly, the introduction is a bit awkward, as in Boots' critique.</p> <blockquote> <p>Level 131 has three known sections at the moment:<br /> The forest<br /> The farm<br /> The dirt path</p> </blockquote> <p>can be changed to</p> <blockquote> <p>Level 131 has three known sections at the moment, given the names The Forest, The Farm, and The Dirt Path.</p> </blockquote> <hr /> <h3><span>In The Forest&#8230;</span></h3> <blockquote> <p>The floor is made with not-so-high grass</p> </blockquote> <ol> <li>&quot;made with&quot; could be substituted with &quot;consists of&quot;</li> <li>You could specify the grass height (e.g. ankle-high or knee-high)</li> </ol> <h3><span>In the Farm&#8230;</span></h3> <blockquote> <p>initially 50 meters long, but eventually acquiring a bit more than 3 miles</p> </blockquote> <p>Can be clarified using more specific language (what do &quot;initially&quot; and &quot;acquiring&quot; mean here?) . As of now it's a bit confusing to understand.</p> <blockquote> <blockquote> <p>the house<br /> The house<br /> the house’s<br /> the house</p> </blockquote> </blockquote> <p>It's repetitive. Try replacing some instances with the word &quot;it&quot; or omit it entirely (e.g. &quot;one of the house's outlets&quot; -&gt; &quot;an outlet&quot;).</p> <hr /> <h3><span>In Entities&#8230;</span></h3> <p>Too many sentences start with &quot;The entity&quot;. Again, try replacing some instances with the word &quot;it&quot;, or find ways to omit it entirely.</p> <p>The &quot;The other entities of this level are:&quot; section need not exist, just list off the rest of the entities. (i.e. &quot;Other entities like &#8230; &#8230; also reside on this level.&quot;)</p> <hr /> <p>Hope that helps!</p> 
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				<title>Re: LOOKING FOR CRITICISM AND GREENLIGHT (Level 131)</title>
				<link>http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16860643/level-131#post-6549587</link>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 23 Jun 2024 19:53:24 +0000</pubDate>
				<wikidot:authorName>Boots_114</wikidot:authorName>				<wikidot:authorUserId>8160086</wikidot:authorUserId>				<content:encoded>
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						 <p>Hello GenoFan, I just read your article and the following is my conceptual evaluation of the article (I am not good at SPaG)</p> <hr /> <blockquote> <p><strong>Level 131</strong> has three known sections at the moment:<br /> The forest<br /> The farm<br /> The dirt path</p> </blockquote> <p>I don't recommend this, it affects the appearance.</p> <blockquote> <p>Section 1- The ForestYou can add two plus signs</p> </blockquote> <p>before it to make the title larger, for example:</p> <blockquote> <h2><span>Section 1- The Forest</span></h2> </blockquote> <hr /> <blockquote> <p>(even if they do not enter the house).</p> </blockquote> <p>This paragraph can be annotated.</p> <p>Suggest adding some correlation to the three regions and describing the main body more.</p> <hr /> <p>I think that after solving these problems, this article is qualified. I hope my suggestions can help you, have a pleasant writing experience! (Note: My native language is not English, I use a translator, and I also use a translator to read articles)</p> 
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				<title>LOOKING FOR CRITICISM AND GREENLIGHT (Level 131)</title>
				<link>http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16860643/level-131#post-6536036</link>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 09 Jun 2024 16:31:51 +0000</pubDate>
				<wikidot:authorName>GenoFan</wikidot:authorName>				<wikidot:authorUserId>9091009</wikidot:authorUserId>				<content:encoded>
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						 <p>I have created my first backrooms level, and it would be great if any of you could read it and tell me what you think.<br /> Here is the link of the sandbox page: <a href="http://backrooms-sandbox-2.wikidot.com/genofan">http://backrooms-sandbox-2.wikidot.com/genofan</a></p> 
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